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I reviewed Lauren Heart and Scott Norix's project 2 drafts.
Revision:
Do I have an identifiable thesis?: Yes I have an identifiable thesis, it points to specific techniques aside from the typical "ethos pathos and logos" using none of those words.
How have I organized my essay?: I organized my essay in a way that separates the various rhetorical techniques utilized by the author and their respective analysis into their own paragraphs. Three body paragraphs, each with its own subject and analysis that follows.
Did I analyze multiple elements of the situation/structure: Yes, but I am not happy with the way I did, I intend to change and add to many parts of this.
Did I explain how and why strategies were employed?: Yes I did, for each example I described exactly why the strategies were employed and their intended effects of the reader. I did not go as in depth as I would have liked to, and will build upon it.
Am I thoughtfully using evidence?: I am not satisfied with my use of evidence thus far. I want to use it more effectively, and in ways other than quoting such as paraphrasing to find a better balance.
Do I leave the reader wanting more?: As my draft is it probably does not answer all the questions my reader might have, I need to fix this by the time my final draft is posted.
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