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After going through my paragraphs, I have gotten somewhat of a better understanding of where they are lacking. In general, the paragraphs have good focus and internal organization. However they at times lack development and effective transitions. The linking of ideas is usually present when necessary, for example in the conclusion.
Here's the link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R6GzxXr1TmkFNpzegON1b2v9ANJ0SSE0Rpbp5h-4zqM/edit?usp=sharing
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